Swales examined the introductions to
forty-eight articles in the natural and social sciences, and found that
most of them contained a sequence of four rhetorical moves through
which a scientist creates a research space for his work. Using these
moves the writer: (1) establishes the field in which he or she is working, (2)
summarizes related research in the area
of concern, (3) creates a research space for the present study by
indicating a gap in current knowledge or by raising questions and (4)
introduces the study by indicating what the investigation being reported will
accomplish for the field (“Structure of Introductions," 80-92; “Article Introductions,” 178-80).
An article by Cynthia L. Selfe in Research in the Teaching of English includes
an illustration of this four-move schema.
1. Establishing the Field:
The term
"writing apprehension," originally coined in 1975 by Daly and Miller
(1975b), refers to a generalized tendency to experience some form of anxiety
when faced with the task of encoding messages."
2. Summarizing Previous Research:
Much of the early research in
writing apprehension was concerned with defining the theoretical construct of
writing apprehension and establishing the validity of the Writing Apprehension
Test (WAT). an instrument designed to measure that construct (Daly &
Miller, 1975b, 1975c). Later research has explored the correlative and
predictive functions of the WAT: Specific studies have connected Scores on WAT
with choice of academic majors and careers (Daly & Shamo, 1976, 1978),
Scores on self-concept and self-confidence measures (Daly, 1979), and
performance on various assessments of writing skill and writing quality (Daly.
1378a, 1978b; Daly & Miller, 1975a, 1975d).
3.
Creating a Research Space by Indicating a Gap:
To date, however, no
substantive research has been done to define the relationship between writing
apprehension and the processes students employ as they compose. It is not even
certain, for example, how or to what extent the theoretical construct of
writing apprehension is evidenced during the act of composing. whether, in
other words, there are definable differences between the composing process
[sic] of high and low apprehensives.
4. Introducing Present Research:
The current study
was designed to address this particular question. The research project reported
in this paper had three main goals:
1. To record the predrafting processes of several high and several low writing
apprehensives engaged in academic writing.
2. To analyze the predrafting processes of both
groups.
3. To examine the results of this analysis for
evidence of differences related to writing apprehension.
Swales’ Model of Rhetorical Moves in Research Articles
(CARS)
The Create A Research Space (CARS) Model, by John Swales
Move 1 Establishing a territory
Step 1 Claiming
centrality and/or
Step 2 Making
topic generalization(s) and/or
Step 3 Reviewing
items of previous research
Move 2 Establishing a niche
Step 1A
Counter-claiming or
Step 1B
Indicating a gap or
Step 1C
Question-raising or
Step 1D
Continuing a tradition
Move 3 Occupying the niche
Step 1A
Outlining purposes or
Step 1B
Announcing present research
Step 2
Announcing principal findings
Step 3
Indicating Research Article structure
Dudley-Evans Model of the Moves Identifiable in Master’s
Theses
Move 1: Introducing the Field.
Move 2: Introducing the General
Topic (within the Field)
Move 3: Introducing the
Particular Topic (within the General Topic)
Move 4: Defining
the Scope of the Particular Topic by:
(i) introducing research parameters
(ii) summarizing previous research
Move 5: Preparing
for Present Research by:
(i) indicating a gap in previous research.
(ii) indicating a possible extension of previous research
Move 6: Introducing
Present Research by:
(i) stating the aim of the research or
(ii) describing briefly the work carried out (iii) justifying the
research.